So here’s the story: Drug violence spins Mexico toward ‘civil war’.
And here’s the piece that provokes this post:
…the United States helps fuel the violence, not only by providing a ready market for illegal drugs, but also by supplying the vast majority of weapons used by drug gangs. |
Victimhood in international relations — great.
How about an alternate rendition?
…
the United StatesMexico helps fuel the violence, not only by providing a ready market forillegal drugsweapons used by drug gangs, but also by supplying the vast majority ofweapons used by drug gangsillegal drugs.
Interesting, no?
So…do I (and/or you) do this sort of thing in my our own communicating?